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[ESC]HELP NEEDED: ADVANCED READER COPY PDF READERS FOR NOVEL
Hi everyone, I hope this message finds you well.
For the very few following my novel, I recently published the Prologue to SECURITY ISSUE: Two Wars Middle A Fence, the transgressive crime novel set in an alternative-history Hong Kong, during a post-terrorism environment. Outside of Free Indirect Disclosure, it follows multiple POVs and their day in the lives, and was written to "unofficially" continue the intersecting lores of THE BORROWED By Chan Ho-kei, and United Front Games' Sleeping Dogs.
I'm particularly interested in feedback from:
Crime-thriller and crime novel enthusiasts
Readers who enjoy transgressive elements and unique formatting styles, such as the "South China Report" style with oral transcript/screen-play type dialogues
What I'm Looking For:
- Brutally honest constructive cricism on implementation of transgression, overall quality, creativity and if it is something you would follow in future ACTs of this novel.
- Suggestions for improvement: I'm very new to writing, and I make mistakes. Whether it's lore bits, pieces of dialogue, environmental story telling, do please suggest.
I don't have any incentives to offer at this moment, as I'm still finding my footing in this process. However, your feedback will be invaluable in helping me improve as a writer and make "Two Wars, Middle A Fence" the best it can be.
If you're interested in reading the ARC PDF and providing your honest thoughts to my c-Mail or in the comment section, please let me know! You can reach out to me directly through Cyberspace.online or via email at crimesretoldentertainment@pm.me, my official work email. Of course, because I'm serious about this entertainment medium and have been working on it actively for 2.5 years, I wouldn't dare poisoning anyone with malware via the link provided, that's just not kosher.
https://drive.proton.me/urls/PSGHET02NR#joCDsgg2RuwB
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Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you!
Best regards,
Devyn Genjima.
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